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Wednesday, September 23, 2015

David W. Tarbet's "Grain Dust Dreams"



Shock and dismay!
Another bad book about grain elevators has been published!


Under the heading “Acknowledgements,” David W. Tarbet, the author of Grain Dust Dreams (SUNY Press, 2015), says,

I have depended on others who have written about Buffalo and its elevators. Reyner Banham’s A Concrete Atlantis (1986) is the classic book on the architecture of Buffalo elevators. It has inspired others to think and write about the subject, including William J. Brown in his book American Colossus: The Grain Elevator, 1843 to 1943 (2009) and all of the contributors to Reconsidering Concrete Atlantis: Buffalo Grain Elevators, edited by Lynda H. Schneekloth (2006). Francis Kowsky has written about, and lectured on, the history of grain elevators in Buffalo. I thank “Frank” Kowsky, Lynda Schneekloth, Rick Smith, Jim Watkins, and all of the others who took time to talk to me about the Buffalo elevators. I should also acknowledge Timothy Bohen’s book Against the Grain (2012) for teaching me about ‘scoopers’ and the people of Buffalo’s First Ward.

In case anyone is interested, Mr. Tarbet never contacted either William J. Brown or Colossal Books, the publisher of American Colossus: The Grain Elevator. No matter. One would think from the statements above that the author of Grain Dust Dreams made no use of the contents of that book, which was, it appears, simply one of those “inspired” by Reyner Banham’s book. This impression is confirmed by chapter 8 of Tarbet’s book, which either mentions or contains interviews with prominent authorities in the field: William Clarkson, Reyner Banham, Rick Smith, Jim Watkins and Lynda Schneekloth. William J. Brown is not mentioned.

But when one reads the book itself, one finds that Mr. Tarbet – whose book includes neither footnotes nor a bibliography – has in fact made extensive and completely unacknowledged use of Mr. Brown’s book. For example, American Colossus is certainly the source of Mr. Tarbet’s assertion that “In 1847, grain elevators were built in Toledo, Ohio, and Brooklyn, New York” (compare pp. 9-10 in Grain Dust Dreams and p. 121 in American Colossus). This failure to properly cite Mr. Brown’s work is compounded by the fact that Mr. Tarbet fails to mention that these pioneering grain elevators were in fact “floaters” (boats that had grain elevators installed upon them), nor that floaters were crucial to the functioning and development of the grain trade all through the 19th century. But in comparison to the deprivation of a scholar of proper credit for his work, the deprivation of one’s readers of the beauty and mystery of the subject at hand – Mr. Tarbet also fails to inform his readers that, after the 1880s, many elevators in Buffalo had “loose legs” (buildings on wheels!) – is a much more serious matter.

A truly impoverished work, riddled with factual errors, misunderstandings, and self-contradictions, and completely uncritical of the ideas relayed to its author by various “official” sources (politicians, academics and businessmen), Grain Dust Dreams, for example, claims that in 1828 “every bushel of bulk grain” was shipped “one barrel at a time” and that the “manual method of unloading grain” was “barrel by barrel,” when the facts are that only flour was shipped in barrels; grain was shipped in sealed burlap sacks; and “bulk grain” wasn’t shipped until after grain elevators had been built in the 1840s, because only they could accommodate – they were in fact built to accommodate – grain shipped in bulk.

Grain Dust Dreams (GDD) also minimizes the role of the engineer, designer and grain-elevator builder Robert Dunbar, whose “engineering talent” was somehow “recognized” by Joseph Dart, the ostensible creator of the pioneering Dart Elevator (p. 8). According to Mr. Tarbet, it was Dart who “engaged” Dunbar in “his [Dart’s] elevator-building project” (ibid). But before entering the grain business, which he left in the 1850s, Joseph Dart was a hat salesman. Before meeting Dart, Robert Dunbar had already built flourmills and elevators in Black Rock, New York (not mentioned by Mr. Tarbet; cf. American Colossus, pp. 109-110), and, afterwards, Dunbar went on to design and built grain elevators (including the miraculous “loose legs” mentioned above) for the rest of his life.

GDD insists on saying like things like “the elevator [built in 1891 by the Canadian Pacific railway] looked very much like Dart’s elevator in Buffalo” (p. 15) and “Dart’s elevator functioned like a terminal elevator but looked like a larger version of a country elevator” (p. 19), when, in point of fact, there are no contemporary images of the Dart Elevator in the 1840s, only “reconstructions” and “artists’ renderings” of what it might have looked like.

GDD insists that a terminal elevator in Thunder Bay “wasn’t built to hold grain, but to send it on” (p. 18), which is such a stupid remark that even its author contradicts it several times: “if you have to store large amounts of grain,” there are “rows of concrete bins” (p. 28); “usually, the stored grain will be held in its bin until the time comes to ship it” (p. 41); and “Whitebox is a commodities futures company that buys and holds grain for future sale when the markets are right” (p. 79). Yes, indeed: this is why the Dart Elevator’s official name was the Dart Transshipping and Storage Warehouse. But “transshipping” is a word that doesn’t appear anywhere in Mr. Tarbet’s book, nor does an explanation of how grain futures work.

GDD insists (way too strenuously) that the Grand Trunk Pacific Elevator built between 1908 and 1910 in Thunder Bay was “the apotheosis of concrete elevator building” (p. 22), “a fully realized model for all elevators in the future” (p. 23) and “the finished form of the modern concrete elevator and the model of all elevators to come” (p. 25). But scholars – real scholars, I mean: people like Robert M. Frame III – have shown that the years between 1906 and 1912 represented a period in which reinforced concrete was mastered, and the years 1912 to 1928 a period in which this building material was widely accepted. While the Grand Trunk Pacific Elevator was indeed a significant elevator, it certainly didn’t end or exhaust the on-going experimentation with reinforced concrete as a building material in elevator construction, nor was it the “model” for “all” the elevators built between 1912 and 1928, because, on the one hand, elevators are not designed and built according to reproducible “models” but very particular needs and circumstances in which “models” are useless and, on the other hand, an elevator built during the period of widespread acceptance (the Marine A in Buffalo, for example, built in 1925) would make a better example of the “apotheosis” of grain elevators built out of concrete.

But Mr. Tarbet isn’t very interested in the Marine A. He tells us that Beth Tauke, “the associate dean of the School of Architecture and Planning at the University of Buffalo and an enthusiast for the preservation of the Buffalo grain elevators,” “knows Marine A well and has brought her students and enthusiasts to the elevator many times,” but relays none of the information presumably relayed by Dean Tauke to her students and fellow enthusiasts. We don’t find out who designed it, who built it, when it was built, why it was built, or how long it operated. Mr. Tarbet states that its “walls were dotted with graffiti images and slogans by urban adventurers who had visited after the elevator had been abandoned” (p. 86), without saying anything specific about those “images and slogans” or without imagining that some of those “images” (for example: the very accurate and colorful chalk drawing of the Standard Elevator, built in 1928 across the creek from the Marine A) might have been created by the people who worked there while the elevator was still in operation.

Tired of this list of embarrassments? I am, too. And so, let me conclude this “review” with something Mr. Tarbet says: “It is easy to do a roll call of elevators that have disappeared from the landscapes of Buffalo and Thunder Bay” (p. 75). Yes, it is easy to find a list of all the elevators ever built in Buffalo (those that have disappeared, as well as those that still stand), but not in Grain Dust Dreams, which contains no such list. But there’s one in American Colossus (pp. 412-416) and nowhere else.

William J. Brown
6 August 2015

P.S. Contacted via Facebook, Mr. Tarbet was sent the following message:

We have been sent a copy of your book Grain Dust Dreams. We note that, though you rather offhandedly mention our title, William J. Brown, American Colossus: the Grain Elevator 1843-1943 (Colossal Books, 2009), your book is full of items that you obviously took from it – they appear nowhere else in the literature. The reference to Wilhelm Worringer, for example. We just can’t understand why you would do such a thing, or why your editors and publishers would allow you to do it, which suggests that you did this research yourself, instead of finding it in a book that you mention but don’t properly credit.

His response was as follows.

William Brown’s book American Colossus is a fine book and I recommend it to serious students of grain elevators. Grain Dust Dreams may seem like elevator-light beside it. It is a trade book without footnotes. Perhaps because it is published by a university press you imagined it was more academic. It isn’t and wasn’t meant to be. Brown’s book is included in my acknowledgments and I hope others will find their way to it from there. I wish the book continued success.

Not satisfied with this, we told him,

These are fine sentiments, and I as the book’s publisher certainly thank you for them, but I don’t believe that they answer the objections being raised. Your book is certainly a work of nonfiction, and it mostly relates historical facts and events. The absence of both footnotes and a bibliography in such a work is a real puzzle, especially in a book from SUNY Press. (Last time I checked, SUNY referred to a university system.). In the absence of these basic features of scholarly research and plausible historical exposition, greater attention is brought to bear on the acknowledgements, which in point of fact only mentions Brown’s book as one of two “inspired” by Reyner Banham but not as one of the works you personally consulted for ideas and facts. The Worringer mention as it turns out is not the best example of you passing Brown’s work off as your own: the best example is your reference to the elevators built in 1847 in Toledo and Brooklyn, which are facts that appear nowhere else in the literature than Brown’s book. Your acknowledgements refer to people “who took time to talk to me about the Buffalo elevators.” But the absence of Brown from this group of people was YOUR doing, not his. You never tried to contact him.


At that point, for some strange reason, Mr. Tarbet stopped responding and, in fact, broke off the connection.

Sunday, February 20, 2011

Nice mention

According to SUNY at Buffalo professor Lynda Schneekloth, writing in the 20 January 2011 issue of Artvoice, "the grand volume on the history of the type [is] by William Brown, American Colossus: The Grain Elevator (2009)." Thanks, Lynda!

Monday, May 17, 2010

GrainNet publishes a notice about my book

Notice in GrainNet 16 May 2010.

Thanks, Mark Avery! It looks great.

Sunday, December 20, 2009

Mark Sommer reviews my book

“American Colossus: The Grain Elevator, 1843 to 1943,” is a provocative, thought-provoking and informative must-read for grain elevator aficionados.

Most Buffalonians today know these hulking structures as largely dilapidated ruins, detached from the critical role they once played in bringing prosperity to Buffalo, the city of their invention in 1843.

The book—so named by author William J. Brown for the elevators’ towering bulk and unapproachable facade —examines them and their forgotten role in developing Buffalo and the nation over a 100-year period.

Brown became interested in writing “American Colossus” while pursuing master’s and doctorate degrees in American literature at the University at Buffalo in the 1980s. The freewheeling book—exhaustively researched and amply footnoted, but weak in the proofreading department—doesn’t hesitate to add an unlikely array of voices to Brown’s ruminations, from Zane Grey and Karl Marx to Thomas Hobbes and William Shakespeare.

The author acknowledges a debt to the late architecture critic Reyner Banham, and repeatedly refers to “A Concrete Atlantis,” his landmark 1986 book on grain elevators. But Brown is sure to ruffle feathers by bludgeoning the revered former chair of UB’s School of Architecture for errors in scholarship.

Brown frequently cites and sometimes spars with Banham’s work while examining how the grain elevator came to be embraced by European Modernists and influence the Bauhaus style of art and architecture.

“American Colossus” is available at www.amazon.comand the Buffalo& Erie County Historical Society. It includes an appendix that lists some 122 grain elevators once in Buffalo, of which only about 15 remain. —Mark Sommer

Buffalo News, 20 December 2009.

Thursday, November 5, 2009

R. Alan Wight reviews my book

American Colossus represents a unique weave of important, but often unconnected threads of American Imperialism. From waterways and railroad monopolies to oil conglomerates and Cargill, Brown discusses the evolution of the modern American grain transportation and storage system. His poetic narrative illustrates how the American Colossus (the grain trade) is used as an economic force to export the American diet and culture, along with our particular form of hegemonic capitalism. This project on the grain “system” of market dumping and local farmer destabilization that threatens our planets ecological stability goes hand in hand with the work of prominent authors such as Dr, Vandana Shiva, Michael Pollen, and Bill McKibben.

Brown walks the reader through the history of the grain elevator. He poses important questions about the classification of these hybrid “building-machines,” traces the many architectural and industrial innovations brought together to “fire proof the tinderbox,” compares and contrasts the architectural and systematic differences of America to Europe, and does this all by neatly structruing his arguments on the shoulders of such renowned historians as R. Banham and W. Cronon. Also, Brown challenges existing historical works for their accuracy regarding pictures and names of grain elevators.

In addition, this research uses poetry, cultural mythology, and religion, with a hint of autoethnographic material to relate the beginnings of our American Colossus to the reader. Brown’s voice can be heard loud and clear has he describes his first hand experiences exploring the now silent, hybrid building-machines of Buffalo, NY. From the huge grain elevators admits our concrete metropolises, to the skyscrapers of the plains, to the thousands upon thousands of local nodes spread across this vast continent; Brown uncovers one of the foundations of our Modern American Empire.

-- R. Alan Wight M.A., Sociologist, University of Cincinnati

Monday, October 26, 2009

Henry Baxter reviews my book

AMERICAN COLOSSUS
William J. Brown
Colossal Books

This book reviews one chapter in mankind's oldest industry, the processing and storage of grain, which extends at least back to 9500 BC.

The story is taken up in 1842 with the building of Dart's grain elevator which was the first storage and transfer grain elevator powered by a steam engine. This innovation reduced the number of workers by 80%, speeding up the process of transferring grain from lake boats to canal boats and so solving a serious congestion problem in the Port of Buffalo. This, combined with the Erie Canal, permitted rapid development of the Midwest and the Port of New York. The trade increased from 1,500,000 bushels in 1841 to 20,000,000 bushels in 1854.

By the standards of the day these elevators were huge, up to 200' long by over 100' high, with almost no windows or doors, and painted black resulting in an almost sinister look. In the words of English visitor Anthony Trollope, "The grain elevator is as ugly a monster as has yet been provided," an so we learn the source of "Colossus" in this book's title.

This book also considers the influence of Buffalo's grain elevator designs on European architecture. For instance German architect Walter Gropius visited Buffalo and was so impressed by the almost pure functionalism of Buffalo's elevator designs that he used the idea at his Bauhaus School of Architecture which produced designs of great simplicity and elegance.

The principal promoter of the idea that Buffalo’s elevator designs greatly influenced European architecture was Reyner Banham, Director of the School of Architecture at the University of Buffalo. Banham in his book “A Concrete Atlantis” compares the elevator designs to those of Richardson and Wright. Brown however is critical of “A Concrete Atlantis” due to its many factual errors.

A useful appendix lists every grain elevator ever built in Buffalo. 140 are included to which in fact a few more should be added. One of them, the Cargill (Urban Mill) elevator, consisted of 4 free standing steel bins serviced by bucket elevators and conveyors which were not in enclosures. So this elevator did not include a building. And you wonder what the German architects would think of how the purely functional approach which produced the buildings they so admired went a step further and eliminated the buildings themselves.

-- Henry Baxter

Western New York Heritage, Volume 12 Number 3, Fall 2009, p.18-19.

Thursday, April 9, 2009

Book review by Richard Palmer, Canal Times

Written in the form of emails sent to my publisher, Colossal Books, between 22 March and 9 April 2009, this review of American Colossus is the book's first!

If you wish to send us a review copy we will write it up. I went on a tour of the abandoned grain elevators in Buffalo last fall - one or two are back in use but the others are just rotting hulks. In some places around the country and in Canada they have been reused as condos, but there's no market for them in Buffalo. I received the book okay but I didn't expect such a "collossal" book. It would take me a year to wade through it. Do you have more of a lengthy news release and a photo I could use? I toured Buffalo waterfront last fall and you have to see it to believe it - rows of abandoned and derelict/useless grain elevators no one knows what do to with except implode them. If you'd like something about the book on the Canal Times website you will have to send me a writeup. I certainly do not have the time or interest to review a 450-page book about grain elevators. Not exactly bedside reading even on a cold winter night.


Richard Palmer, Editor, Canal Times.